Introdução
Vamos ajudar os colegas a escrever em inglês de forma correta. Então, vanos reescrever alguns posts que os colegas publicaram.
Tarefas
1ª) Ler a postagem do colega;
2ª) Reescrever o texto fazendo as correções necessárias;
3ª) Publicar o texto reescrito, por você ,na janela de comentário da postagem do colega;
4ª) Ler o comentário e fazer as correções necessárias no seu texto.
Processos
Passo 1 - Cada aluno irá receber uma folha impressa com o post de um colega.
Passo 2 - Ler e reescrever o texto fazendo as correções necessárias.
Passo 3 - Publicar o texto corrigido, por você, na janela de comentário do post do colega.
Passo 4 - Depois, cada aluno irá ler o comentário no seu blog. Então, reescrever o seu post conforme as correções feitas pelo colega.
Recursos
Collective Blog - http://aprendendoenglishnainternetcoletivo51.blogspot.com/
Posts dos colegas para correção
Sexta-feira, 9 de Maio de 2008
Daily Routine
Hi!
I usually to get up at 8:00, brushig my teeth,washing my face and have my breakfast. I watch tv. After i have lunch, brushig my theeth. Igo to shool.
Postado por cassi às 10:06 2 comentários
Daily Routine
Hi!
I usually to get up at 8:00, brushig my teeth,washing my face and have my breakfast. I watch tv. After i have lunch, brushig my theeth. Igo to shool.
Postado por cassi às 10:06 2 comentários
Quinta-feira, 17 de Abril de 2008
I free time...
hello.My name is luiz Felipe.I play if may rabits on sundays.I riden a bicycle on sometimes.I watche tv every day.
Postado por Felipe às 09:37 5 comentários
I free time...
hello.My name is luiz Felipe.I play if may rabits on sundays.I riden a bicycle on sometimes.I watche tv every day.
Postado por Felipe às 09:37 5 comentários
Quem sou eu
gu
my name is gustavo ande 9 ias olde ande 2 irmãos 1 irma.
Quem sou eu
juliano
Quevedos, Rio grande do sul, Brazil
My names Juliano is I'am 13 years old. 1 brother, my I am mother is Evani,I am father is Vanderlei.
Quinta-feira, 8 de Maio de 2008
In my free time...
Hello!
I like to play, to play soccer. It is fun!
I like study, listen music, watch tv...
Postado por Lara às 12:47 5 comentários
Quinta-feira, 17 de Abril de 2008
My family and occupations
Hi, my name is Leonardo.My mother student nutrição.My father is functionary public.My brother student.My sister student.My cousin Luiz dione student, Leandro student.My grandma retired.My grandma retired.My uncle works at USP. He sells milk.
Postado por leo às 18:22 3 comentários
gu
my name is gustavo ande 9 ias olde ande 2 irmãos 1 irma.
Quem sou eu
juliano
Quevedos, Rio grande do sul, Brazil
My names Juliano is I'am 13 years old. 1 brother, my I am mother is Evani,I am father is Vanderlei.
Quinta-feira, 8 de Maio de 2008
In my free time...
Hello!
I like to play, to play soccer. It is fun!
I like study, listen music, watch tv...
Postado por Lara às 12:47 5 comentários
Quinta-feira, 17 de Abril de 2008
My family and occupations
Hi, my name is Leonardo.My mother student nutrição.My father is functionary public.My brother student.My sister student.My cousin Luiz dione student, Leandro student.My grandma retired.My grandma retired.My uncle works at USP. He sells milk.
Postado por leo às 18:22 3 comentários
Quem sou eu
luis carlos
my names luis carlos I am, is 12 years old. two brothers, my I am mother is Florentina,I am father is Emiltom.
Quarta-feira, 9 de Abril de 2008
um pouco de mim
my names luis carlos age12 years two brodhers ay live Quevedos
Postado por luis carlos às 11:49 11 comentários
luis carlos
my names luis carlos I am, is 12 years old. two brothers, my I am mother is Florentina,I am father is Emiltom.
Quarta-feira, 9 de Abril de 2008
um pouco de mim
my names luis carlos age12 years two brodhers ay live Quevedos
Postado por luis carlos às 11:49 11 comentários
Sexta-feira, 9 de Maio de 2008
Daily Routine
I usually have to get up 11:40 everyday.And I rew lanch my famili 12:00 are 12:30 I go school at 12:45.I dinner at 9:00 with my family.I go to bed 12:30 are 1:00
Postado por fernandinho às 10:10 7 comentários
Daily Routine
I usually have to get up 11:40 everyday.And I rew lanch my famili 12:00 are 12:30 I go school at 12:45.I dinner at 9:00 with my family.I go to bed 12:30 are 1:00
Postado por fernandinho às 10:10 7 comentários
Daily routine!
Hello!I usually have to get up at 8:00.I brush my teeth, change of clothes and then take coffee.I play my litle sister, and whact TV.I take bath at 10:30 am.I have lunch at 12:00I go to school at 12:50 pm.My classes start at 1:10 pm and finish at 5:10 pm.I come back to home.I eat snack and I will go to play.I take bath at 6:30 pm.I have dinner at 8:30 pm. I watch TV at 9:00 pm. And I'm go to sleep at 11:00 pm.
Postado por Milene às 12:55 0 comentários
Hello!I usually have to get up at 8:00.I brush my teeth, change of clothes and then take coffee.I play my litle sister, and whact TV.I take bath at 10:30 am.I have lunch at 12:00I go to school at 12:50 pm.My classes start at 1:10 pm and finish at 5:10 pm.I come back to home.I eat snack and I will go to play.I take bath at 6:30 pm.I have dinner at 8:30 pm. I watch TV at 9:00 pm. And I'm go to sleep at 11:00 pm.
Postado por Milene às 12:55 0 comentários
Quinta-feira, 17 de Abril de 2008
In my fre time...
Hi!!!!I do many tring time in my fri time!I go to dance "gaúcha" music on thursday. We have a dance group.I surfs the NETevery day.I sometimes go out with my family.I watches TV avery day, too.And ry ding a bycicle.
Postado por Nady às 07:42 6 comentários
In my fre time...
Hi!!!!I do many tring time in my fri time!I go to dance "gaúcha" music on thursday. We have a dance group.I surfs the NETevery day.I sometimes go out with my family.I watches TV avery day, too.And ry ding a bycicle.
Postado por Nady às 07:42 6 comentários
Quarta-feira, 7 de Maio de 2008
I and my family
Hello!!!!!!
My name is Rafaela .I am10 yars old. My mother is Nilva. My father is Genesio. My sister is Simone.My brother-in- law is Alexandre.My mother 47 yars old. My father 49 yars old. My sister20 yars old. My Brother -in- law 30 yars old. My mother is housewife. My father is farmer. My sister is salesperson. My brother-in-law is "frentista".
Postado por rafa às 12:45 1 comentários
I and my family
Hello!!!!!!
My name is Rafaela .I am10 yars old. My mother is Nilva. My father is Genesio. My sister is Simone.My brother-in- law is Alexandre.My mother 47 yars old. My father 49 yars old. My sister20 yars old. My Brother -in- law 30 yars old. My mother is housewife. My father is farmer. My sister is salesperson. My brother-in-law is "frentista".
Postado por rafa às 12:45 1 comentários
Quarta-feira, 28 de Maio de 2008
In my free time...
Every day I riding a bicyde. I watch TV.Sometimes I to listen to music.Saturday I go to mass in the church.
Postado por Vanessa às 11:44 0 comentários
Terça-feira, 15 de Abril de 2008
I and my family
Hi,my name is Alexandre.I'am 12 yers old.Mother student.father police.Mami businesswoman.
Postado por alexandre às 11:04 18 comentários
In my free time...
Every day I riding a bicyde. I watch TV.Sometimes I to listen to music.Saturday I go to mass in the church.
Postado por Vanessa às 11:44 0 comentários
Terça-feira, 15 de Abril de 2008
I and my family
Hi,my name is Alexandre.I'am 12 yers old.Mother student.father police.Mami businesswoman.
Postado por alexandre às 11:04 18 comentários
Avaliação
Será considerado satisfatório se o aluno conseguir fazer a reescrita do post do colega da melhor forma possível.
